ok dragonflys english lesson time- you shouldnt have put the "albeit missing blade hands" bit in brackets since the "as you can see sweetneetu has drawn an amazing drawing" and the "so thanks for giving us amazing art even tho it has no blade hands" wont make sense if you entirely remove the sentence in brackets... so you should have just done this- As you can see sweetneetu has drawn an amazing drawing, albeit missing blade hands, so thanks for giving us amazing art... sorry for being such an english nazi i actually have a type of OCD so don't mind me too much
ok dragonflys english lesson time- you shouldnt have put the "albeit missing blade hands" bit in brackets since the "as you can see sweetneetu has drawn an amazing drawing" and the "so thanks for giving us amazing art even tho it has no blade hands" wont make sense if you entirely remove the sentence in brackets... so you should have just done this- As you can see sweetneetu has drawn an amazing drawing, albeit missing blade hands, so thanks for giving us amazing art...
ReplyDeletesorry for being such an english nazi i actually have a type of OCD so don't mind me too much